User talk:Avocadosarecool/sandbox
Hello there,
Your article looks very very good!
The only two things that came to my mind are:
- add more sections, it would be easier to follow that way (ie. Treatment, Geographic distribution, Identification, etc)
- cite your references prior to punctuation marks
otherwise it looks great, can't wait to see what your final article looks like!
Zhmurcha (talk) 19:12, 29 October 2014 (UTC)
Article comment
[edit]This looks great so far! The only thing I could suggest is to include some information on how people become infected (is it an opportunistic pathogen, or can infect healthy people?). How effective are the treatments? Are there any severe cases where it wasn't easily treated? Great job on gathering all this information! Liuxia26 (talk) 01:05, 31 October 2014 (UTC)