User talk:Beautiful days111/sandbox
PEER REVIEW (MARIA): Looking at your sandbox, it looks like you have a lot of information to add, which will be very beneficial to the article. I think you did a very good job explaining and organizing the information, especially because you have relevant subsections and you break your text down to a few paragraphs, which improves the flow of the reading. Since not all of your sentences are referenced, I am not sure if you included any information that isn’t explicitly described in your sources. The only think I would recommend is to avoid putting your conclusions from your reading and strictly sticking only to the direct information your references provide.
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