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Adding Sources

Adding sources to History of Baku

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_of_Baku

Mckay, John P. "Title: Baku Oil and Transcaucasian Pipelines, 1883-1891: A Study in Tsarist Economic Policy." JSTOR. Association for Slavic, East European, and Eurasian Studies, n.d. Web. <http://www.jstor.org/stable/2499309>. Gokay, Bulent. "The Battle for Baku (May‐September 1918): A Peculiar Episode in the History of the Caucasus." Taylor & Francis Online. Frank Cass, London, n.d. Web. <http://www.tandfonline.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/doi/citedby/10.1080/00263209808701208#.Vi2HcM4iqFI>.

Lattu, Kristan R. History Of Rocketry And Astronautics : Proceedings Of The Seventh And Eighth History Symposia Of The International Academy Of Astronautics : Baku, U.S.S.R., 1973 ; Amsterdam, The Netherlands, 1974. n.p.: San Diego, Calif. : Published for the American Astronautical Society by Univelt, Inc. 1989., 1989. Louisiana State University. Web. 25 Oct. 2015.

Henry, James Dodds. Baku, An Eventful History. n.p.: New York : Arno Press, 1977., 1977. Louisiana State University. Web. 25 Oct. 2015.

The sources look good, but you should post them in your sandbox, not the talk page. Josef Horáček (talk) 15:39, 26 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

You added the sources wrong. The sources should be linked to citations in the text. I reverted your edit. Josef Horáček (talk) 16:10, 3 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Re-editing copy edits

Deleted comma after resolution, placed semi-colon after expensive on 3D-printing — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blakenyguen (talk • contribs) 18:07, 26 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The Lead

Not a bad lead. You should remove all capitalization except in the name of the country. Also delete "worlds" - national parks are called "national" for a reason. Once you're done with these edits, you can post the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:25, 1 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]