User talk:Blitz96/Washington Haggadah
Article Draft section[edit]
You mention this: "M. Glatzer argues that while Joel was the painter of the Haggadah's art, he was not in fact its scribe. Glatzer points out scribal conventions indicative of Meir ben Israel Jaffe. Joel ben Simeon's colophon, Glatzer contends, names himself only as the work's painter. (zirlin 266)" It would be helpful if you could give the reader information on this person as why we should believe he/her to be a reliable authority on the subject. Also, I would use the artist's last name rather than 'Joel' once its been mentioned. Cfbird1008 (talk) 00:42, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
Clarity[edit]
Overall, I think your page is on the right track. As you continue to add new information you'll want to tighten up the language a bit to make it sound academic. Cfbird1008 (talk) 20:48, 5 April 2024 (UTC)