User talk:Bmitc004/sandbox

Possibly changes

Overall I think it’s great. I think you need to give a more specific explanation of at least 2 items showcased in the exhibition. You only gave an overview of items. If the themes are not on the original Wikipedia page maybe you can make that paragraph it’s own subtitle! And for your two specific items maybe you can choose from two separate themes. There are some minor grammar errors as well. Also would make sure you’re not restating what the Wikipedia page already has. Bmoli004 (talk) 23:08, 24 May 2019 (UTC)