User talk:Bridierose/sandbox

Peer Review

I think you have done a great job with both your outline and your 500 words. I would suggest maybe adding citations to the paragraph as if you were writing the final version. This could help you practice with Wikipedia's citation machine. I also suggest perhaps moving the coinage depictions section under or above the iconography section. As I understand it, the only reason scholars know what the Athena Promachos may have looked like is due to coinage. It may be a good idea to add a section on the description of the statue as scholars believe it to have looked like. In additon, I suggest refraining from using quotations unless absolutely necessary. Seeing as Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, quotations can distract from the encyclopedic qualities. I would only use a quote if it is important to the study of Athena Promachos. Overall, I think you are doing a great job and have a lot of great information!Cococoops26 (talk) 03:14, 27 October 2017 (UTC)