User talk:Brittany Hudson/sandbox

Hello Brittany Hudson, This edited piece gave a detailed layout of who Leonne Ross is and her work "Come Let us Sing Anyway". Over all it is a good layout but it lacks detail and definition. Don't allow the summary of Leonne Ross to be your main focus, instead the short story should be. However, as it relates to your edited piece you have not spoken about the story you chose nor the different gendered themes that it surrounds. I hope and trust that you do so really soon. Seeing that time is of the essence. When you have stated the different gendered themes that were present in your short story, that you have read. Ensure that the your edited piece contains hyperlinks and in-text citations which can help the article to become clearer to its readers and also adequate references. You can rely on the materials that was produced in the weekly training sessions along with additional research to guide you in making this article excellent. Ensure that the themes you chose were gendered themes and themes that you have read and understood. So, that your article can bring forth clarity and your thoughts and your perceived notions expressed precisely. IamWestleyKeating (talk) 20:02, 25 March 2022 (UTC).

Thank you for the above corrections. Will take into consideration. I wanted the reader to grasp a complete knowledge of who this writer was first, before diving into the short story. Brittany Hudson (talk) 13:52, 3 April 2022 (UTC)