User talk:Cabbadi/sandbox

Hi, I wanted to give you your feedback on your talk page. Things look great for the page at large. For your contributions--make sure that they are typo free at the place cell page. There were a couple of punctuation issues, odd wording and typos in various areas. So read carefully! Also, make sure your group addresses the comments at the Place Cell page and do a sweep to make sure that you have linked to other pages throughout your section at all opportunities--remember if it is linked earlier in the actual page for place cells, don't link to it again. I would also suggest that Ming Yi /discussion be reconsidered and/or deleted for two reasons: since Wiki is not about primary resources per se (i.e. talking about someone's study in detail) and is more about reviews of the literature, you might try to find an additional study that cites the Yi study or find another study that duplicates the Yi study and summarize the two findings to support your contention. The second reason is that, this study is a dissertation, not a peer reviewed article, so on the basis of that, you should delete the discussion from the place cell page altogether. You can leave it in your sandbox though. Also, the authors name appears to be Yi in the references, but Xi in the text. PCMidd Intro Neuro (talk) 11:59, 4 December 2013 (UTC)