User talk:Chitimes2/An Jung-sik

Peer Review

Suggestions added Td1935 (talk) 16:51, 10 April 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for the review. Regarding the inconsistency between Chang and Jang, I noticed that and I edited that. As for referring to An Jungsik, it is better to refer to the historical figure by his last name compared to his first, which is why I refer to him as An throughout the article. As for the lead, what is written isn't my work, but I haven't gotten the chance to work on it. I'll make sure to work on it, though and make it more concise. I agree that including information on his background and childhood would be great, but I simply haven't been able to find a source that offers anything on that. The images are coming soon, so stay tuned for that! And thank you for the reference recommendation - I'll check it out. Chitimes2 (talk) 20:03, 17 April 2023 (UTC)

Hi Ahmajorette, thank you for the review. Everything you read is my own words and work. I agree that the lead section should be added on more. I will work on that later. Regarding the Boat to the Peach Blossom Land, I disagree with your suggestion mainly because what you read is my own work and words. There is no plagiarism with this line. As for the 'respectable relationship', I do not think it is as strange as the review made it out to be, but I will replace that phrasing with something else. As for the part mentioning him being criticized, I will look back at that because I do not have any recollection of removing critique, especially since my draft includes a critique of him. I will find a way to wrap up the article better so that the entire article is wrapped up nicely.Chitimes2 (talk) 20:17, 17 April 2023 (UTC)