Thanks for adding a section about the role of slavery to the section about industrial era; I think you may want to clarify the chronology a bit more; provide links to the abolition of slavery in the US, and note when the National Labor Relations Act and the Fair Labor Standards Act were passed. Provide links for those acts if there are existing articles already.
Indicate where quotes have been taken from.
Thanks for noting about the separate spheres; I think it was an important addition. Be sure to fix the date of the publication.
You may need to update the figure for the share of foreign-born domestic workers, since Parreñas' article is now 20 years old. Also, you need to fix the date of her article. I believe the foreign-born share has gone up.
