User talk:Crowangel666

Recent Hack/Slash edits

Thank you very much for contributing to the somewhat loney article on Hack/Slash. However, I'd ask you to please be careful with any future additions you make. I've had to correct a lot of spelling, punctuation and grammar in these edits and trim a lot of information that was overly detailed for a wikipedia article. Thank you. Planewalker Dave (talk) 15:19, 10 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I'd like to repeat my previous request. Your recent edits of the article, while a good effort, need serious corrections in terms of grammar and punctuation. They also need to be cut down in length/detail. Planewalker Dave (talk) 17:35, 22 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]