User talk:Danielbriones1/Constance Merritt

I like that you guys added information about what schools she attended in order to receive her education and what degrees she earned at each school. However, in that first line of your page it says "she received a B.A. and an M.A. but doesn't specifically say in what maybe adding that would help with getting to know more about Merritt. I think that it would also be beneficial for readers to know more about her early life in order to know more about why she writes the pieces of works that she does. It would also be nice to know what disability she has in order to know how it may influence her writing. Overall, great work so far! Adrianabuen (talk) 20:27, 18 October 2021 (UTC)

I agree with the comment above. I would like to know more about her life and what has brought her to this current time where she is helping people and starting an organization for low-income families. maybe not dwelling on her disability, but shine light on it in a positive way that reflects who she is now Missevyy (talk) 20:46, 18 October 2021 (UTC)

Overall the page looks pretty good so far. I think the sections about her education and volunteer work are pretty informative as far as her life goes, but I think the inclusion of a section that focuses on her poetry or a list of her notable work would be great. I know sources are pretty limited for most of the poets but at least listing some of her published work would be informative. Also a lead at the beginning of the article to give a brief overview of her background or what she does currently would also be helpful to the reader to get a glimpse of what the article discusses. In addition, I think the article would be further elevated by citing the sources at the end of the sentence that used a reference. Other than that I think the article's looking pretty good! Keelylasela (talk) 20:52, 18 October 2021 (UTC)

The article felt Lacking. It described her education and what she was currently doing with no in between. The lack of detail and mention of her disability, works, and their connections to each other made the article feel as though there wasn't much to learn about her. The lack of information made it seem odd that she even had a Wikipedia page if what made her an important part of the disabled community was in her own bibliography. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kaylynn Holt (talk • contribs) 20:52, 18 October 2021 (UTC)