User talk:Davidxyz/sandbox
Some comments and edits. I hope they help!
Intro[edit]
- This is a really great and comprehensive intro
Development[edit]
- You include a block quote from Mao Zedong. This is great and adds needed information and context to your article. However, I’ve often seen block quotes on Wikipedia separated from the normal paragraph structure, so just consider formatting.
- The explanation about Mao’s position is nice, but I’m not really sure if it belongs in a technical development section.
- Really comprehensive section- great job!
Reception[edit]
- This is a really great addition.