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Assignment 2 Evaluation/Week 2/Dianazh[edit]

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Visual_communication Article: Visual communication

The article discusses about the visual communication which is one of the most important way of people to communicate besides verbal communication. However, the article talks few information about the study of visual communication, which makes the article lack of persuasion.

Four questions: 1. Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic?

  Yes, the article develops around the topic of visual communication such as the analysis and the elements.

2. Is the article neutral?

  Yes, the opinions are neutral.

3. Does the link work? Does the resources support the topic?

  The resources work and support the topic. However, some content does not have citation, for instance, the last paragraph of overview and the paragraphs in image analysis.

4. Is any information out of date?

  Yes, some of the information is out of date. There are totally 12 citations in the article. Five citations are before 2010.
  Dianazh (talk) 04:38, 21 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Assignment 4 contribute new content Dianazh[edit]

Hi professor, I expanded the section called Modern with citation 2. Thank you. The link is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Music_festival#Modern Dianazh (talk) 20:13, 5 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]