User talk:Dishabhavsar/sandbox

peer review[edit]

This was well done. You have a lot of information about conditional mutations and looks like good source material. The only content suggestion I have is separating it into two paragraphs: the first could be describing what a conditional mutation is and the second could be how to use it, since you have plenty of information on that. Overall, very good article. Ddoerflinger (talk) 18:04, 12 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

You cover an important point about mutation especially the conditional mutation , organized and clear. I think it looks good but you might need to add some different cases in categories. HadeelBinomar (talk) 15:50, 14 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your reviews, I appreciate the suggestions. I have an issue with creating a second paragraph, because i want to do that, but since it is a list with bullet points, it creates a new bullet point, separating it from the subject conditional mutations. i would love if I could get help on that. Dishabhavsar (talk) 16:26, 20 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]