User talk:DrewBrown37

Welcome

Hello DrewBrown37! Thank you for your contributions to military history-related articles.

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Alan Peart article

Hi, I have been following your work on the Alan Peart article. It is important to keep it factual and neutral in tone, and appropriately referenced without going into undue detail. Most of the content added is from Peart's autobiography which is not ideal as a source; you should use sources independent of the subject. This does mean that you may not be able to go into the level of detail that you would like. I suggest having a look at a few articles on other NZ flying aces, e.g. Brian Carbury, Minden Blake, and Alan Deere to assess the style in which they are written and take that into account as you work on this article. Feel free to ask me questions - just ping me using the Zawed template. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:34, 9 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]