User talk:Ellie Irving/sandbox
Ellie's Peer Review
[edit]I think you have a really great start Ellie! You've identified a lot of subtopics that I think will greatly improve the quality of the article. I really like that you've created the society and culture subsection. It seems as though you have some really great sources. It might be helpful to the article to have some more recent sources, as I see that you have a lot of historical sources.
-Sheila