User talk:Eltonion

- add edits to the already existing stubs in article - mike needs to make sure he also makes edits to the original work posted to make it less like an advertisement as stated above the article.

- add references to existing stubs

Lenses

Hi. So as discussed previously, I have decided to rewrite the "Lenses" section completely. Originally there were only a few sentences, but I made subcategories instead to organize the main lenses Ray-Bans have to offer their consumers. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Elyse.a.m. (talk • contribs) 04:43, 29 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

- Ok cool, make sure we discuss the various types of lenses that are available for Ray-Ban as it is not specified in the article.

just added a photo of two of the lenses described in the article

Secondly, We need to add specific internal and external link codings for the already existing stubs ^ok, sounds good Elton

International and Cultural Impact

International Impact

I have added more information to this section as there was limited information. The original was vague in describing the impact, as it only decribed the use of Ray-Ban's in the middle east. I have also included some new information on the Ray-Ban slogan in 2007, as well as global music events for the company

Sponsorship

Going over the original formatting of the article, I noticed that there was nothing about sponsorship or business collaboration. I added a small section which briefly entails who Ray-Ban affiliates with — Preceding unsigned comment added by Elyse.a.m. (talk • contribs) 05:08, 29 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Brawn GP and Ray-Ban Rooms (added in the hyperlinks in-case you wanted to check them out!

Alright sounds good, make sure to reference everything that you use from other websites

Cultural Impact

I have added a whole section on cultural impact, which includes the use of movies such as Top Gun, and the use of Ray-Ban sunglasses on celebrities. The quotes and references were appropriate for this article. Enjoyable to read!

Make sure Mike references the history part, as there are no citations in that section -Elton

I just made a comment about that as well on the top of the page. -Elyse