User talk:Eqw55/sandbox

Hello EQW!

Very good so far. Keep it up!RJBazell (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 21:29, 6 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, amazing work!! Under historical context consider replacing the Ernst Wynder link with "Wynder and Graham 1950 Study"! Under "Social Impact" consider talking more about the impact on laypeople. Also, remember to add citations! :) -little ski monkey — Preceding unsigned comment added by Littleskimonkey (talk • contribs) 17:25, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This article looks really good! The information is thorough and comprehensive. No other comments except for citations as stated above :) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Alextm21 (talk • contribs) 17:32, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hey eqw55! Your article looks really great so far! You do a really good job of covering all of the relevant aspects. I would suggest expanding some more on your last section regarding more modern examples (maybe give some more links to other wikipedia pages with similar issues?). Also, I think you could make your information a little more neutral and informative, but I know this might be hard because of the nature of the topic. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Arayofsunshine12 (talk • contribs) 04:42, 14 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]