User talk:EthanBazos/sandbox
Assignment 2[edit]
You have truckloads of good content here that will need to be compiled and focused. Make sure that you put species names in italics and capitalize the name of the genus. Also make sure the double check spelling on terms, e.g. Arhtoderma, transmittion, etc. Much of your content looks to be taken directly from sources, and you need to be careful as you work through this to ensure that you reword and rework this material appropriately. Nice job so far. Medmyco (talk) 22:33, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
Assignment feedback[edit]
You have a lot of information here! I would suggest using transitional words and subheadings to section out your information and to make the flow better. You could also create links to other wiki articles so that when someone doesn't understand a technical term they can look it up by the link. I think you could also sort through your facts and condense them to make more clear and concise statements. Good job on gathering all this information!Liuxia26 (talk) 00:47, 31 October 2014 (UTC)