User talk:Gizelleg25/Jane J. Robinson
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I completed my peer review. It's a good start for the lead. I have some suggestions in my peer review for how to improve it. AmoderateDflatmajor (talk) 20:14, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
The lead is a good start. For the body, I suggest elaborating on exactly what her contributions were, and briefly describing them in layperson's terms in a body paragraph or two on her research SLFPetersen (talk) 00:14, 17 April 2024 (UTC)