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Pesticide Draft Peer Review 10/9 (AMM1989 (talk) 14:13, 9 October 2018 (UTC)) Hook: The hook is short and informative but needs to be extended so that they reader understands the importance of these effects and how they truly impact the farmers. I think it would be beneficial to look at very common pesticides and see what health issues they cause due to exspoure or inhalation. 3. Public Concern: This addition is good but needs to elaborated on. Also, I think you should go back into the article and write more about point source pollution for the reader and add citations to the information already on the live page.