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Polly Cooper Peer Review[edit]
Good job, Hannah. Overall your article provides a broad overview in an unbiased manner about the historical contributions of Polly Cooper during the Revolutionary War. Your sources appear to be valid and appropriate to the nature of this assignment. I do have a few suggestions for addition if the information is available to you; although I understand that these people we are investigating can be somewhat obscure and verifiable sources can be difficult to come by.
1. If the information is accessible, you could expound more on Cooper's expedition from New York to Valley Forge and her experiences during the journey.
2. Changing "Colonial Army" to "Continental Army."
3. What did Cooper do after the war? What was the rest of her life like? Did she marry? Did she have any children? Were they also notable people?
4. When was she born? When did she die?
5. What was her early life like?
6. Has she ever been portrayed in any media such as television or films? Who was the actress that portrayed her?
7. Create a link to the Smithsonian Museum page when you mention it near the end of your article.
I know information can be hard to find so it is understandable that you've tapped out of available sources. I suppose we should be thankful for any scraps of info that we do find!