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I will be editing the article "Tetrasomy 9p" for AdGen at Western University. Hmcmath (talk) 16:18, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
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[edit]Your references are very well organized, however they need to be put into an appropriate format, rather than just links (APA, MLA, ACS, etc...whatever you're most comfortable with). Sentences are well written. Consider adding citations as you go to avoid doing it all right at the end.
Great start!