User talk:Hockeystribe/sandbox

1. More sections needed, lacking a lot of information. More information and content would be helpful. 2. Does a good job of being professional and using neutral, professional language. 3. could include the origin of the gesture in its African roots, usage differences between demographics, refer to similarities and differences with similar gestures such as rolling eyes, maybe add an info box if possible 4. one source listed doesn't actually have to do with cut-eye. Perhaps look into writing an eye-rolling page as there is a lot more information? 5. Well balanced within article. However, all sections seem too light. 6. Reference article for non-verbal communication — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lightly Browned Toast (talk • contribs) 19:55, 21 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I would have the List of Gestures article link back to this article. Also, I would include links for Oxford English Dictionary and also Shakespeare.-- Yamazaki.l — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yamazaki.l (talk • contribs) 20:02, 21 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"The gesture shows the other party that what they are doing is so annoying that it is not even worth looking at or giving a thought, which is why many relationships are destroyed by excessive use of the action." Can be rephrased (Annoying does not seem like the right word choice). Link could be included for Flirtation.--Dlrsvr (talk) 17:08, 28 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]