User talk:Hypermole115/Covet (Band)

Sandbox Draft

Hi Professor,

Just a reminder that I have uploaded my draft of the band, Covet, that I have been following for a while. Let me know what changes you want me to do!

Thanks,

Adriel Hypermole115 (talk) 18:38, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft

This is a good draft. I would get rid of the lists in the lead and just use sentence, i.e. "Current band members include: Smith, Jones, etc." Before sprucing up, you should cite your sources inline - - i.e. use the "cite" button to insert footnotes and include a works cited at bottom of page. ProfHanley (talk) 17:33, 6 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Current band members include: Smith, Jones, O'Reilly. Hypermole115 (talk) 20:08, 7 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]