User talk:Jenniex0095
Relevance: The writing in this article is a very straight and to the point retelling of Fuller’s life. Each individual section of the article seems to follow their heading very well. That is, the “Awards” section discusses her awards and such, without adding unnecessary information.
Dating: According to the article, the last time Fuller was involved in something notable was in 2002, so this article may be out of date. It is also possible that she has simply lived a quite life since then. Other Improvement: There are very few other improvements to be made to the article. The information is sectioned well and within that it is broken up into easy to read paragraphs. There is line in one section that could likely be expanded on, but besides this, the article is quite good.
Neutrality: As stated, the article is a straightforward retelling of Fuller’s life. As such, it does a good job of presenting the facts of her life with little bias. In describing what she is known for, there are a few words that are not completely neutral. However, it would be overly nitpicky to say that the article is bias because of them.
Citations: There was a total of 10 articles cited for this page, two of which were broken. Of those that worked, the information in the sources did line up with what was written. Most of these were simple facts, such as her date of birth or awards she won. The sources were mainly articles on her life, so they do seem to be slightly biased in her favor, something not mentioned in on the page. Jenniex0095 (talk) 04:18, 25 January 2020 (UTC)
OHSU transgender health program moved to draftspace
[edit]An article you recently created, OHSU transgender health program, does not have a suitable encyclopedic tone to be published. It needs a copyedit to form a neutral point of view. (?) I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:
" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Willsome429 (say hey or see my edits!) 17:06, 8 June 2020 (UTC)
Your draft article, Draft:OHSU transgender health program
[edit]Hello, Jenniex0095. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "OHSU transgender health program".
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! UnitedStatesian (talk) 04:35, 9 December 2020 (UTC)