User talk:Jimmitang/Enter your new article name here

Your article is very interesting. I would probably go ahead and try to add more details to it, so that it is thorough. Another thing that I noticed was that in your first section the word proceed should be in the past tense. Another thing that you might want to consider adding would be a sidebox. The sidebox is an easy way for readers to scan your article for information and would make your page more visually intriguing. Good luck!Just the Facts Wasson Facts (talk) 15:49, 6 October 2011 (UTC)