User talk:Jiraz/2019 Bangkok bombings
Feedback[edit]
I think Jiraz did a good job of creating the outline of the whole event and expressing what happened. He wrote the event of a bombing. However, he can add more pictures to give readers a visual impact. He can put some pictures of what is that place looks like after bombing. In addition, he can put a section like"influence"to show what the government did or what the country acts to this event. Other things I think he really does very well. BY Wenhao Sun
Comment[edit]
I don't like the content layout. Check other people's pages and change up the name of each section. Maybe you should consider getting on my level --Kaitlyntian (talk) 12:09, 23 October 2019 (UTC)