User talk:Joycelivmarshall/Humanitarian crisis

Your article was super interesting and I didn't know a lot about this topic so it is very interesting to me. I thought you picked good images that related to the paragraphs in the entry. I think you should add a little bit more to the first image of the people bringing resources to Sierra Leone, such as why they are bringing resources there, was it after a natural disaster or is it because they are a poorer country? Katebalcom (talk) 19:00, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Hi, as far as the image the are really good and relatable to the article. However, as for the first caption you could add like why were the resources brought by the British for the village like you can add "after many natural disaster" at the begging of your caption. And as for the second image you can improve the caption by adding words like "hopeless" to make it bit emotional.

I hope my feedbacks were helpfulMeemakter (talk) 15:31, 1 December 2021 (UTC) Meemakter (talk) 13:38, 1 December 2021 (UTC)