User talk:Juliannrose

Microsoft Pinpoint

The reason why I reverted your edits was that they appeared too promotional to me. For example, your addition "while giving them the ability to connect with other Microsoft partners to meet the unique needs of customers" sounds too much like an advertisement. Also, you should also not put external links in the article text. If they are sources, put them between the ref tags.

Now, that does not mean that you cannot go and update the article again in a way that is more compliant with Wikipedia guidelines. Iwilsonp (talk) 01:35, 17 February 2015 (UTC)