User talk:Jwozniak19/Acoustics in Multi-Purpose Sporting Venues

SO this first paragraph I would put it under interior room acoustics instead of in inter-space noise control. That is really more about how to control things from one space to another rather than the acoustics within the space. With this in mind, I would get rid of the first sentence in your addition nad replace it with something more like "the goals for the interior space acoustics are often very different than other rooms." and replace the references you have to interspace noise and replace it with interior noise. I would also make sure you link to the article.

As far as your new addition, instead of 'All-around purpose' I might replace that with the 'multi-purpose nature'. I would also change 'sonically a factor' to 'has a positive impact on the acoustic environment'

I would change 'you' to participant, or audience member, or something similar. This seems like general acoustics for stadiums and not necessarily specific to European football, does the heading make sense? maybe something more general? Sporting event acoustics or something similar

Overall very good. It's hard to start a page from scratch and I think this is a really good start. --Kim.riegel (talk) 03:26, 13 May 2021 (UTC)