User talk:KACherniss/sandbox
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Hello, KACherniss
[edit]This is Conner Baldwin, Campus Ambassador (In-Training). I've read your sandbox, and actually found it quite well done. If there are synatax edits, I wouldn't have a clue, but the content seems well-laid out by the outline, and well-supported. You might respond by a discussion in class about the August 12 suggestion that it be merged with Social Networking. I think the class would be enhanced by that. I think your content might avoid the need for that, frankly."