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Thanks for signing in as Student Editor! Please let me know if you have any questions about this assignment. Hoopes (talk) 19:59, 30 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Please see the article for the Zvejnieki burial ground to see how another student in ANTH 406 at KU has contributed material on specific secondary burials. I added a hyperlink in that article to the one that you edited. Hoopes (talk) 22:15, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Have a look at my edits to your edits of the article. Notice how I added hyperlinks, consolidated verbose language, and tightened the language in order to make it more clear and succinct. Keep in mind that this is an encyclopedia article that should be clear and to the point. I found a lot of repetition, which needed to be minimized. Hoopes (talk) 03:39, 20 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]