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As mentioned, I am currently unable to access any of my research materials and any resources.

Nevertheless, I can confirm that the reference is to the individual entries for Dumbrell and Alden in the Probate collection. These show Nicholas Lane witnessing the wills of Edward Dumbrell of Morden (proved 1587) and Richard Alden of Malden, yeoman (whose will dated 18 April 1591 describes Lane as of Morden and the testator’s “trusty friend” and appoints him overseer of the will’s administration).

The deprecated term “editors” is not needed. LondonScottish (talk) 08:38, 1 August 2020 (UTC)

Ah, I see. Thank you. I had assumed you meant 'sub-editors', but now assume you mean 'sub-section' or similar. Ideally, if you have access to the publication, it would suffice to add relevant page numbers to the citation. As you can see, I have added the transcriber name but hidden the detail above in the comment, pending your explanation.

To be honest, I think this sort of detail, and several of your notes, merit inclusion in the body of the article, perhaps by expanding the first section, or adding a 'family' section. --KenBailey (talk) 14:26, 1 August 2020 (UTC)