User talk:Khmccorm/sandbox

Here is a link to my sandbox page that if anyone would like to edit that would be great.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Khmccorm/sandbox

Khmccorm (talk) 20:08, 3 December 2014 (UTC)Kelly

Are you editing the sandbox page or directly onto the website for your shrew? From what I see on the sandbox, there haven't been that many edits put in but the actual wikipedia article seems to have more work done on it (presumably by you?). I'm going to review based on the actual article since the history shows you as having last edited it. I think the biggest thing right now would be to see if you could find a free image of the shrew to replace the one currently used in its wikipedia article and incorporate the museum data in the current image into the physical description (although admittedly this may be hard to source). It's pretty hard to see the water rat in the current image. It also could be a first idea to delete the first section in the article and move the text up to the top of the page above the table of contents. This is more in keeping with wikipedia's standard format. Ekmoyer900135 (talk) 05:27, 7 December 2014 (UTC)