User talk:Klombela

The 3 articles I'm considering editing

1. I could edit the Tinashe article as it is lacking current updates about her upcoming album and I have interviews from her to use as sources.

2. I could edit the Age of Youth article as it's a stub that lacks any information about its plot so I could find sources to improve the page.

3. I could edit the Tinashe discography as it has false information that needs to be edited out.

Your draft was really good and filled in a good gap in the current article with more up to date information. It might be good to flesh out the information around the singles a little more. For example, if she didn't co-write 'Company', who did? Or some more context around "Ride of Your Life". Your sources look good and reliable, and your tone was neutral the throughout, which was really good, especially because you're writing about a person. So overall great job, but some areas could use more context. Rezuschlag (talk) 19:24, 17 October 2016 (UTC)Rezuschlag[reply]

Thank you for your help! I thought that just linking to the Company article would be enough if the reader wanted to know who, but I will make sure to add that in. I don't think I have any context for Ride of Your Life so I'll have to look at more sources for it. Klombela (talk) 19:29, 18 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]