User talk:Kltk78/The Fall Of Atlantis

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Hey, just from a brief glance at the article: here are my suggestions,

  1. cut down the plot, remember WP:Summary style
  2. focus on the Real World content, use newspaper reviews, journal articles and reputable websites for this
  3. also the lead sounds like advertisement

Hope that helps, Sadads (talk) 21:54, 16 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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