User talk:KristenKing/sandbox
Peer Review
[edit]In the user talk page it doesn't seem like much has been changed/added. Of those things that are in the sandbox, I was a little bit confused as to if the editors were adding these statements and I also don't know where the first statement has come from. I think it would be beneficial if the editors explained what they wanted to with the information added to the sandbox and where it is being added into the article. I also think that checking some of the sources for this article would be beneficial since there are so many. Under the section in the article titled, Global, I think that some of the information should be checked and cited because it seems as though it is coming straight from the editors themselves. Qrsx (talk) 04:06, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
We had a slight rough start however I feel as if we have a better understanding of things since class today. We will add more information and explain things better within the next few days in our sandbox. I will look into the global article as well as checking the sources that were included. Thank you for the feedback! Mprinella (talk) 18:26, 27 March 2018 (UTC)Madisson Rinella
We haven't added much information yet because we were a little confused about some things regarding editing the article. From here, we are planning on looking into more sources and finding valuable information. I'll look at the global section and for more information to add in. Thank you for your feedback! -Kristen King — Preceding unsigned comment added by KristenKing (talk • contribs) 00:56, 28 March 2018 (UTC)
There isnt much information added to your sandbox but the most reported crime rates, you should try adding more information and corrections, also explain how to prevent sex trafficking from happening since the article doesn't explain ways to prevent it. There is a lot of information regarding statistics and stories but it should be categorized better. Justin Rowland April 5th 2018
There is a lot more information on the official Wikipedia such as different countries of sex trafficking, consequences and even campaigns against it, It try changing some things in those categories in the article- Justin Rowland Cite error: There are <ref> tags on this page without content in them (see the help page).