User talk:Kthra/sandbox

You added a lot of good information to this article, Katie! I really enjoyed and appreciated that you added the history piece about WWII. I made several grammatical corrections and wording corrections. You used a neutral voice, which is good for Wiki.

The only other correction I would suggest you do is add a citation at the end of the material you added to the Deterioration section. I believe you got the information from EARlog 5?? Npond (talk) 20:16, 3 March 2017 (UTC)