User talk:Laschke/sandbox
The diagram is licensed as CC and actually already in Wikimedia. If you click on the image, it will give credit to the original author and licensing information. I also went in and cleaned up the last section. Let me know if anything else should be adjusted.
Laschke (talk) 17:30, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
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[edit]@Laschke, Dundermifflinthisispam, and K.bontje:
Nice work on your draft. Some changes you should still make before moving live
- You need to make sure that each statement in the article can be connected to a source. The lead is fine (as long as everything in the lead section is covered in the body of the article) but everything else should have references. I have added {{citation needed}} tags in places where you should have citations, but don't currently.
- Your first reference is missing. If you click on the [1] it takes you to a blank reference. I suspect that the actual reference got deleted at some point in the editing process. The easiest thing to do would just be to add the reference again.
- Consider linking terms that the average reader might not be familiar with. The first section is fairly well linked, but beyond that, I think the only link was the one I added.
- References go after punctuation, not before. Section headers should use sentence capitalization (only capitalize the first word and proper nouns) not title capitalization.