User talk:Lolasoji/sandbox

I am doing copy editing for my CSC104 class on this article. To improve this article i will be focusing most of my time on spelling, grammar, punctuation and capitalization issues. So far, i have found several issues in the area i am looking under. Here is a link to my sandbox: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lolasoji/sandbox I am open to any suggestions on how to improve this article even more.