User talk:Lolasoji/sandbox3
User: Lolasoji I could not find the talk page for this specific article so i am making my own. I found multiple punctuation errors in this article while I was reading through it so I decided to fix those. I also re-worded various sentences, in order to improve their structure. I am open to more suggestions on how to further improve this article.
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