User talk:MAGM1812
June 2024
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Hello. This is a message to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions, such as the edit(s) you made to Melissa Cohen Biden, did not appear to be constructive and have been reverted. Please take some time to familiarise yourself with our policies and guidelines. You can find information about these at our welcome page which also provides further information about contributing constructively to this encyclopedia. If you only meant to make test edits, please use your sandbox for that. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you may leave a message on my talk page. Thank you. JSFarman (talk) 02:49, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
- Hi JSFarman,
- I'm not sure as to why my addition violates our community guidelines. The addition contains pertenant information and was obtained from an established news outlet with appropriate citations. I would request my edit be restored as it is factual and properly cited. Thank you. MAGM1812 (talk) 13:54, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
- Hi MAGM1812, thanks for asking.
- Plase read about maintaining a neutral point of view. Re: sourcing: Fox News is considered generally unreliable, biased or opinionated in covering politics, particularly from November 2020 onwards.
- If you are using a lot of adjectives in an edit, chances are good that you are violating NPOV. Your last edit was closer to usable, but still problematic, as indicated by bolded words: "On June 24, 2024, she lashed out at a former Trump White House aide during a Tuesday appearance (not biased but too general - include the date, day of the week is not necessary) in court to support her husband Hunter Biden, who has been charged with three felonies stemming from a 2018 firearm purchase. (Choosing to include these details in an article about Melissa Cohen Biden is a stretch in terms of neutrality.) Her remarks were directed at Garrett Ziegler, who was sued by Hunter Biden last year for publishing the contents of his infamous laptop. Approaching Ziegler at the trial, Biden's wife (she is not his property) pointed her finger at him and said, "You have no right to be here, you Nazi piece of s---."
- Thanks again for asking. I hope this is helpful. Your contributions will be welcome and appreciated if you adhere to the guidelines. JSFarman (talk) 17:19, 5 June 2024 (UTC)