User talk:MadeleineMarieC/Childhood schizophrenia
Everything discussed is relevant to the topic, and there are no distractions. The article is neutral with no heavy biases. All the viewpoints discussed are equally representative. My only suggestion would be to add sources/citations for all of the negative symptoms mentioned. Given the format of how this information is being presented, I believe this would greatly benefit your edits. By this I mean, you have a source supporting your description of avolition but not apathy or blunted emotional effect. While adding these additional sources is not a necessity, it would provide more reliable information for what is being discussed as well as reinforce the format of the added section. Overall, everything looks great, this would be my only suggestion.
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