User talk:Makeitclearer
Dear Everyone,
Suggesting new wording for the first line,wording are taken from an article published in India's one of the Most renowned news papers, More current compared to existing notes/wordings. The Hindu newspaper is considered to be very reliable source and these wording were said before several thousand people, many politicians, civil servants and people from different walks of life from different parts of the world where witnessing. Thus these wording definitely reflect many people's thought, the current wordings are just one man's view in a book, could have been just a blog if it was more recent.
However I am not removing current wordings but adding more appropriate and thousands of common peoples thoughts front.
If everyone agrees I would also like the wording changed as new spiritual movement instead of new religious movement, these wordings can also be found in several articles and also said by Deputy Prime Minister of India (he was in this role when he made this comment), L.K.Advani,who represents much larger mass expressed before lakhs of people.
link where you can find the wordings: http://www.hinduonnet.com/mp/2003/04/07/stories/2003040700860400.htm
Suggestion: Sahaja Yoga is a methodology on self -transformation and creating consciousness that leads to a happy and blissful life according to many [1] though few call it a new religious movement "
Makeitclearer (talk) 19:19, 27 April 2011 (UTC) Makeitclearer
- ^ – The Hindu A message for one and all... Monday, Apr 07, 2003 viewed 6 November 2006