User talk:MarissaGrosz/Electron-withdrawing group

Peer Review

Hey Marissa,

I hope you are well. Please let me know if you can see my comments from peer review session :)

Have a good day

Take Care GurkiratSinghNijjar (talk) 19:48, 8 November 2023 (UTC)

Hi Gurkirat,

Thank you for your comments! I am able to see them. I hope you are well too!

Kind regards,

Marissa MarissaGrosz (talk) 23:02, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

Peer Review

Overall, the article is more organized with headers and sub-articles with many added information to understand EWG compared to the old article on EWG group. The language used is also neutral and clear.

Some suggestion I would give:

- In photovoltaic application, I would suggest adding a visual aid like the molecular structure of DPQ, derivative, and how it can be linked with IDT or IDTT to create quinoxaline-based conjugated polymers to help the readers understand the flow better.

- Also in effects on benzene and acidity adding an illustration on the inductive effect, resonance and linking the effect to the wiki article of inductive effect or cite a source about it.

-Linking EDG wikiarticle can also be done in the subsection of comparison with EDG groups.

Dev1 0302 (talk) 20:12, 9 November 2023 (UTC)

Hi! Thank you for the feedback!

I am planning to add visual aids to the photovoltaic application and effects on benzene and acidity.

Regards,

Alena Moya.priroda (talk) 02:06, 20 November 2023 (UTC)