User talk:Mckaylajones/sandbox
Notes[edit]
Hi! I have some notes for you:
- You need to make sure to specify the page numbers when using a book as a citation - I'm specifically looking at the Routledge book.
- I would put the history section before the medicine one, as this defines the term 'heroic dose' for readers. I've actually changed this for you in the draft.
- Make sure that the two sections do not contain redundant information. This may turn into one of the sections containing less information if it's already covered adequately in the other.
Overall this looks good, so what you'll need to do now is work on ensuring that the content meshes well together and doesn't contain redundant information. I've moved over some of the content in the article to your draft so you can get a better idea of what the work will look like once you begin moving content over. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:51, 17 April 2019 (UTC)