User talk:MehrAzin Z./sandbox
It looks like good start. Although you have not added anything to the following categories: signs and symptoms, mechanism/pathophysiology, diagnosis, treatment, epidemiology and notable cases. I believe that these were due although I do understand if there wasn’t enough information available. I do like that there are picture, but I would suggest trying to move the abstract next to the visual and then moving the contents after to add a better flow. --Afigueroa16 (talk) 01:47, 16 November 2019 (UTC)
Good Start to the overall skeleton of the Wikipedia article. You did a good job at separating the necessary parts of the Wikipedia page into the sections that need to be talked about. Now its just time to fill in the proper information. Excellent start and im excited to see the final product Lfreeman04 (talk) 05:04, 16 November 2019 (UTC)
- What you have looks good, but obviously there is a lot missing.
- Could use some more linking to other articles.