User talk:Melanieblue97/sandbox

Peer review

I really found your work to very very thorough. You made it very comprehensible and incorporated the the history of each of object very well. These subjects you chose paired together nicely and bleed into each other in away that creates a nice cohesiveness. You made excellent use of your sources and maintained a neutral stance throughout.

I would suggest using more sources next time in order to back up your work. However, the sources you did use were very good. I might also advise describing the appearance of these items a bit more. Jbeeks11 (talk) 06:28, 25 May 2019 (UTC)